HAPPY
NEW YEAR
Hello friends… what’s
up guys? Today is the end of December 2014, So Tomorrow is new year. I want to say HAPPY NEW YEAR FOR YOU ^_~ …Have you gotten
all of your plans in this year? Maybe there are many plans that can’t reach
in this year? Or you have resolutions about next year? Let me tell you about my
plans that have realized or not in this year and of course about my resolutions
for next year .
I
have many plans in 2014. For example,I hope I can be better person. I can help
my parents to pay my school fee, have scholarship, have a part time job like be course teacher, can improve my skill,and can get better score. In addition, I hope I can join to
organization in my campus, Have a great birthday which all of my close person can
remember it, I can have laptop and gadget like my friend, and I can make my
parents always proud with my achievements.
Well, I want to share to you about my plans that have achieved. In this year, I had surprise party from my best friends when I have birthday. I could spend my time with my family, my boyfriend, and my best friends. That time is the best birthday that I ever had. In this year (2014) I got laptop from my father. I didn’t believe before that I could have laptop because my father never said before. He just asked me to accompany him to go to Hi-Tech Mall Surabaya. Suddenly he bought me a laptop. I’m really happy. In addition, I got occasion to be course teacher although just three months. Besides that, I have part time job. I worked at department store. It was difficult to me to divided my time. Even thought that was hard, I still tried to do all the best that i can. I could help my parents to pay my midterm fee because that job. furthermore, I can join to Organization of English Department’s student. Thanks Allah for your mercies and blessing .
Well, I want to share to you about my plans that have achieved. In this year, I had surprise party from my best friends when I have birthday. I could spend my time with my family, my boyfriend, and my best friends. That time is the best birthday that I ever had. In this year (2014) I got laptop from my father. I didn’t believe before that I could have laptop because my father never said before. He just asked me to accompany him to go to Hi-Tech Mall Surabaya. Suddenly he bought me a laptop. I’m really happy. In addition, I got occasion to be course teacher although just three months. Besides that, I have part time job. I worked at department store. It was difficult to me to divided my time. Even thought that was hard, I still tried to do all the best that i can. I could help my parents to pay my midterm fee because that job. furthermore, I can join to Organization of English Department’s student. Thanks Allah for your mercies and blessing .
There
were many plans that I can’t reach it in this year. It’s like I can’t continue
my part time job because I can’t manage my time so well. I can’t help my
parent’s again for pay my school fee. I can’t buy a gadget like my friends in this year. I often feel
inferior and confuse with certain lesson which make me doubtful. I failed to get
scholarship from the bank that I had test and others. Even though l failed, I
will try again next year.
Okay
guys, I have resolution for 2015. I hope in 2015, I can be better person. In
addition, I also hope I can useful for my family, my close friends, my club,
and my country. I hope there are many blessing that I can get. I can be more
focus person, diligence person, lucky person. I wish I could manage my time for
useful activities and wish all the best for me and for all. Happy new year
guys. :D
I think you too much to make a paragraph like I can help my parents to pay my school fee, van have scholarship, maybe you can use “I can help my parents to pay my school fee with a scholarship that i received”.
BalasHapus, have a part time job, can be Course teacher, can improve my skill, can get better score, can join to organization in my campus, I think you can use “ furthermore, i hope have a part time job to become a course teacher and i can improve my skill to get better score. Finally, i can join to organization in my campus.”
it's just my opinion vivi...
thanks put.
BalasHapusI want to share to you about my plans that have realized. = I want to share about my plans that I've achieved. ( word choices) hehe
BalasHapus* I could spend my time with my family, my boyfriend, and my best friends -> I could spend my time with my family, my boyfriend and my best friends
BalasHapus( you do not need ( , ) before and vivi )
* mercies ( what is meaning mercies vivi? )
thanks iin...but I think we still need comma.
BalasHapusmercies are plural of mercy.
thanks ayu.