FOREST GUM
Someday,
There was a boy who named Forest Gum. He had physical defect. He needed
crutches for his feet. He usually use it to help him stand up , walk, and run
.In the afternoon when he and his girlfriend was on the way, there was many
naughty boys which ride their bike mocked him. They not only mocked him but
also throw him with the rocks. Her Girlfriend pitied with him. He asked him to
run for avoid the naughty boys. The naughty boys still bullied him. When forest
had ran, They still tried to catch him. They chased him by bike.
Forest never
gave up. He ran as fast as he could. He still ran till his crutches broke.The
miracle came. Although his crutches broke, He still could run. He ran so fast
like the wind. The other peoples who saw was really amazed. He could run fast
with his feet without crutches help. Then he went home. Some years later, He told to his friend about
that amazing memory.
why do you use ''He had physical defect,?, and why do you not use he has physical defect?. please explain to me
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BalasHapusThe other peoples who saw was really amazed
BalasHapuspeople is already the plural of person vivi so i think better if your sentence is like this "The other people who saw was really amazed" .. but if you talking of humans in general. An ethnic or national group (the Tajiks, the Russians, etc) is also called a people and the plural of it is peoples.
thanks girls... :D
BalasHapusPUTRI...because i use past
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